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i know you are but what am i by ~ShameShowsGuiltiness:iconShameShowsGuiltiness:

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I know You Are But What Am I? - MOGWAI


A shot from an old photo shoot (last month).

A photo shoot for a guy named, Marlson B. He wanted some new shots for his myspace/promo pics for his music and all. So I did, met up, did the photo shoot and it's been a month or so since I've gotten back to these. So here you go and yeah.


Model: Marslon B.

(I wish he had been more in the center)




Please don't use my photo in any way, shape or form
without written permission. Thank you.

MX

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=StrayedMusician Apr 7, 2009, 3:41:15 PM
I like the fact that he's not exactly in the middle. Makes it more "real" I suppose.

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~ShameShowsGuiltiness Apr 7, 2009, 4:25:48 PM
Yeah I suppose - yeah you're right.

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"Light me and watch me unravel. I am your cigarette."
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~myparamedic Apr 7, 2009, 8:57:16 PM
i kinda agree with *StrayedMusician
it might take away from it.

but i could always fix it if you'd like


i spent forever getting THIS

centered when i was shooting it.

but i ended up having to move the chair in PS haha.
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=StrayedMusician Apr 8, 2009, 5:29:04 AM
:thumbsup:

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~Jazbagz Apr 8, 2009, 6:39:34 AM
I love this image actually. As you said, I'd say it'd be better with him perfectly in the centre and the horizon perfect since you have all the straight lines on the side (which I think are absolutely brilliant).

The other thing I would have said to give it more oomph, would be stark white shirt, and go for contrast in that sense. Or with colour use a bright corner for the shirt, like Red or Bright Blue etc, Something to bring it out more as it's a bit grey on grey. You could try editing the shirt in an editing program yourself, but yes. Excellent photo.

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~ShameShowsGuiltiness Apr 8, 2009, 7:28:25 PM
:D :D

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"Light me and watch me unravel. I am your cigarette."
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~ShameShowsGuiltiness Apr 8, 2009, 7:29:40 PM
Many thanks for the critique, this was an uplanned photo shoot - it was just whatever really but I can see your ideas and how they can enhance this image. Thank you.


mx

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"Light me and watch me unravel. I am your cigarette."
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~ShameShowsGuiltiness Apr 8, 2009, 7:31:07 PM
Ahh yeah, you're right.
Ohh nice haha. Yeah things are tricky to get back
to the center when its' a bit off lol.

Good photo though :D

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"Light me and watch me unravel. I am your cigarette."
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